Woweee!!! That thing is badass :D i really love the unique use of the color on this one and specially when i looked closely i saw that you used white lines for the spider walker and black on the guy and the ground.. it differentiate both of them which is nice.. i can see shaky lines though :P but overall you worked pretty hard and that can be seen clearly, keep up with this and keep practicing bro :D

Woot!! this is pretty amazing, you could actually take this idea to a further step by transforming this mech to something based on an insect or animal.. with that said you can give a role to your mech and show the mech is controlled by a pilot, female manga like character would be badass :3 *brain is running with enormous ideas* lol

Hi there Paskel, this is quite an interesting piece, before i started reading the description and the story, just by looking at the illustration i got a feeling that something is wrong and creepy about the girl.. maybe the guy is hallucinating or something. its quite a feat to narrate a story in just a still image but you did and nailed it quite well. The fog brings out the eeriness in the environment which is really nice. I wish you goodluck for the challenge and in your upcoming artistic endeavour :) your effort reflects in the result.